Please rate this rap verse for me?

ive seen life through a demons perspespective

use to live life blievn nobody needs 2 b respected

i wuz like 4get the president to him i aint even a resident

the end is evident no need 4 csi evidence

im from where facts were irrelevant

til i rose where 1 of us would never concieve to be

type of fantasy u see flashn on yo tv

b4 reality they wuz still gettin piad on a salary

im into rap individuality treadin a road wit many technicalities

all by myself like mona lisa in her gallery

to be different make em see u like u in da distance

in an instance from a grown man to an infant

in their eyes type of people i despise

im above them i rise like maya known poetry

poetry and rap infinitely synced into a symphony

together forever by me the definition of infamy

Please rate this rap verse for me?concerts

Just forget the people that are telling you about your spelling. Cuz that doesn't matter. your verse was tight.

Please rate this rap verse for me?headache opera theater

Me likey - YOU GOT SKILLS
that was good... it was sort of deep i would expect that to be from NAS or Kanye West
are you serious???try going back to school to learn how to spell correctly,that might help you.
Maybe if you had better grammar, I wouldn't immediately look at it and think, "look, a wannabe / loser / idiot."

I didn't read it - I'm not commenting on the content, just the overall first impression.

Get rid of the numbers, then maybe I'll take you seriously and read it.
datz raw azz hell yo got it ( what ever it izz) lol

yeah but datz raw.
i dont even get this crap dude
Yeah that's really good, I've been into Rap for 20 years now (starting out with De la soul, Jungle brothers, Junior mafia) and I'm liking your work.

I have to agree partly with the others though, how'd you learn such good words without knowing how to spell them?!

Use spell check and lose the numbers...otherwise...Great!! ;0)
10/10 man. That was nice.

ADD: Hey Rachel B. Stop hating, that was really good. I would like to see you write like that. Same with you that's above her.
10/10

I liked it

You got skill
swing %26amp; a miss. tryin to hard to be deep. put it on wax, typing out a "rap" doesn't mean anything to me.