What is your opinion of this poem?

The Gods will forever dine

With indifference

Unforgivingly

On injured men

Where wet dirt is lifted

By crusty whispering trolls

With red elbows

That dig like the loins of dogs

The yellow flesh of those

In deep and hollow chasms

Of wives turning grey

When the clan gathers

To a somber symphony

Of filth and smiles

On soiled tables

Pulled apart and burned

On the tiny girls fathers

The Gods will forever dine

What is your opinion of this poem?imax theater

It doesn't make any sense, sorry.

What is your opinion of this poem?classical music opera theater

I have a hard time relating to this piece of writing in any way. It's all so nebulous. I'm not sure where I'm supposed to be in it. There's some dark imagery but it is so fractured and disconnected that I have a hard time following. Perhaps I'm not a careful reader, but I know what I like when I read it. This is not something I like or understand. Perhaps you could explain it.
While not at all a FAN of your work, This one "works" for me. I offer a modest change in one thought.

"That dig like the loins of dogs" I might change like and say "To" ? Just a thought.

Steven Wolf

just my two "sense"
Powerful.
It is very amusing.

I hope that if I ever start posting my poetry on Y!A again you will take the time to carefully craft fitting parodies. Your derisive demeanor is extremely entertaining for me.
'I do not think anyone should like or dislike it.

No one cares'

It doesn't make sense. if your guna write .. 'poetry'

make sure it sort of makes sense. you know..

like an opinion? yea.

there was no need to be an asss.

i asked people to be nice.

not the fcking opposite.

soo. in my opinion.. your poetry pretty much.. sucked.
too much symbolism. Clean it up a bit.

Hehe, I'm one to talk.

Maybe some more simple images paired with ones that you already have.

the loins of "dogs" lie is pretty interesting. But the yellow flesh and red elbows just seems over the top.
Though I am NOT a fan of your critiques, I'll say that this is fabulous work. Obviously your work outshines your blunt views of other's work.
Other than the Gods dine what were you trying to say here?